I’m hoping this will only need a few more changes. What do you reflect?
Would you hire me vs. other new institution grads?

thx

Attention (insert name here):

I am attracted in pursuing the job notch in your marketing department, because my experience and enthusiasm to diversify my skills will compliment your company’s overall goal to promote brand awareness and improve consumer relations.

I am passionate about the opportunities I pursue and am confident that my experience in marketing, social media, sales, and journalism will make me a excellent fit for your company.

Since 2008, I developed and self-managed a successful online jewelry and collectibles business, where I was awarded Ebay Power Seller status for my uniformity with excellent consumer service and high quality merchandise. I also developed and managed a Website for a family owned construction company that required dexterous use of applications like Cyberduck and iweb. By rising flyers and business cards that I distributed at local events I helped the company build community exposure and expand its building contracts for an additional year.

Recently, I served as a make pleased writer and copy editor for the Rescue Mission’s monthly newsletter. Part of my duties built-in writing copy for a 20,000+ audience, performing editing duties for the CEO and other executive staff, and designing and managing a smaller biweekly newsletter for the Rescue Mission Youth Program. Working with the organization required proficiency of Microsoft Office Suite, the creative ability to cultivate and successfully manage an online blog that raises awareness of child homelessness, and excellent knowledge of the Associated Press writing style. Among the rewards was building a loyal readership for the Rescue Mission’s social media channels and attaining a celebrity endorsement via his Facebook fan page.

My principle goal is to invest myself into an enterprise I’m passionate about, and to diversify my skills along the way. I am a firm believer that education does not stop after institution and that striving for self-improvement in my career and my personal life will maximize my ability to deal with goals successfully.

I look forward to speaking with you in the coming weeks about how I can help promote your marketing team.

Best Regards,

Stacey XXX

PS: I will follow up in two weeks to confirm that you expected this material, and to inquire about setting up an interview.
Edit: It’s really “improve your marketing team”
I’m sure you know I meant “take in letter.” My 3-year-ancient was nagging me as I was posting this and I wrote the incorrect word.
Originally I did not have the PS. I posted this here yesterday and someone suggested I add that.
Why do you have to be such a complete jerk about it?????
Well, “Curious”. At least we know my investigate/investigative skills are not inept.

It’s simple to personally attack someone from behind a computer, but your anonymity is now exposed!!!

It must be nice to sit your 250lb miserable butt in front of the buffet at Disneyland, Sarah Colnic!!!

Best answer:

Answer by Lisa
This is a typical take in letter and not a Resume. The take in letter requires improvements.

I have the ability to help you with each, if you would like. But doing so is very time consuming; thus I would like a donation for my efforts. I have made many successful resumes and take in letter for family and friends by several costly resources that I have available. I also have a bestie that is a certified resume writer and she can look it over if any corrections are needed. If you use a professional, it would cost 0. and upwards.

Hint #1: It is best in a take in letter for you to catch their attention quickly.
Hint # 2: You must limit the use of the “I” word because it is a guaranteed take in letter rejection if used as much as you have above.
Hint #3 Remember, You ARE SELLING YOURSELF for a job that you want and are the best canidate for the position, so they need to know you are confident in yourself.

Give your answer to this question not more than!